New Outline

 New Outline

Here is the new outline of the opening tittle sequence:

• Puts on the vinyl

• Man whistling along to the song, he walks from left to right, pan follows his waist as he walks past his scientific set up (distillation, equipment out)

• Over the shoulder shot from the woman to the man over by the window (silhouette)

• The whistling stops and he takes out a bag of berries in the same shot

• Close up of him holding up the berries to the light of the window

• Extreme Close up of clock ticking with the sound

• Extreme Close up of gentle roaring flame

• Extreme Close up of bubbling water in the flask (foreshadowing the bubbling funnel)

• Medium closeup of him putting the berries down 

• Close up of his chest and lower half of his face looking out of the window (from a diagonal angle)

• A shot of outside through the window (POV) of the sky?

• Close up of his chest and lower half of his face again but he returns to his task

• Shot of all of the equipment again

• Shot of foot struggling from behind as it is tied to the chair

• Tweezers sterilise with fire 

• Pick the berries out of the bag and into the pestle and mortar 

• text message (shot of phone buzzing on a different surface). His wife asking what he wants for dinner that night

• closeup when One falls on his hand

• Uses bleach or a strong chemical to wash his hands because of the berry 

• he picks it up again with tweezers and discards it 

• Puts on rubber gloves, for extra protection

• Wipes the tweezers off on a bit of tissue (something of that sort)

• Extreme close up of blade slicing the berry 

• Crushes the berries with loud banging (shown through different angles and titled, distorted angles to create sinister intention)

• Uses a spoon and puts it into a beaker

• Close up of pure water dripping from the condenser of the setup into a (different) beaker, he grabs it

• Pipette, a few drops into the crushed berries, swirls it around

• Puts it down, sighs, tapping his finger / he is anxious

• Sits down

• Takes off his gloves, (sitting) and smokes as a reflection 

• Another over the shoulder shot from the woman of him smoking at the window

• Puts it out, walks to the poison

• The prepared poison in front of him, pan follows him as he walks to the woman 

• Extreme close up of her eyes, distressed

• Silhouette of him coming towards her from her point of view

• Quick cut her hands struggling hard

• Quick cut feet pushing harder

• Quick cut the vinyl spinning

• Quick cut her eyes are wider, tears rolling down her cheeks (these quick cuts could be jumped between in editing to create a frantic desperation)

• He pours in the poison

• Over the shoulder shot looking down on her as she chokes

• Extreme Close up of funnel bubbling, liquid spilling over and splashing her face

• Extreme Close up of eyes getting weaker

• Extreme close up Hands going limp